Getting closer to deadline day and my portfolio coming together, I went to see John which went well. I mentioned how I feel like my website doesn't represent me, he persuaded me to change it to ensure that it does. From this I have altered a few things around such as my home page. I originally had a collage of images on there that represented my day to day life, after analysing this we felt like it was confusing for the viewer as it had no relevant to other content. He told me I had a strong logo and that people pay a lot of money to get a logo like that which filled me with a lot of confidence. After changing my website around, I went back to John a week later and he seemed very pleased with my outcome and said I didn't need to change anything. 

 

From my feedback with Paul and Richard on the 8th November 2018, they both said I had a great body of work and can’t wait to see the final outcome. I shown them my work before I changed it and when I did the agreed with John that I should have a more minimal home page to make it clearer to the viewer and thats what I have done and am much happier with the content. 

 

I have touched upon my CV feedback under there CV reflection here.